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Arts and Musics - Yoshin - 11-30-2017
To start heres: Speed Highway Remix
And also my SoundCloud
I need all the feedback I can get!
RE: Arts and Musics - Yoshin - 04-12-2018
"Oceanic View"
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/369211930356875264/433870651191721984/unknown.png)
"British Columbia"
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/369211930356875264/433880709950865408/unknown.png)
RE: Arts and Musics - Snessy the duck - 04-12-2018
The tall tree on the left kinda blends in with the mountain in British Columbia. Otherwise this looks pretty good!
RE: Arts and Musics - VinnyVideo - 04-12-2018
Those backgrounds are really cute! I agree with Snessy that the British Columbia background would look clearer if you made the tall tree on the left a bit shorter, though.
RE: Arts and Musics - Pedigree - 04-12-2018
Loving the Speed Highway Genesis remix, especially the guitar sound.
The little paintings of that scenery looks lovely!
RE: Arts and Musics - Evil Yoshi Toes - 04-12-2018
I think the tree overlapping the mountains in the back helps with the depth, it's just the value that is too similar causing it to get lost. They look really nice though
RE: Arts and Musics - Yoshin - 05-04-2018
I addressed some of your concerns and also I did a new piece
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/326548753450532865/441944843296571403/unknown.png)
RE: Arts and Musics - Snessy the duck - 05-04-2018
The tree definetly stands out more now. I like it!
RE: Arts and Musics - Yoshin - 05-16-2018
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/385866162656903176/446333945735413760/unknown.png)
RE: Arts and Musics - GamerInGeorgia - 05-16-2018
That looks really nice! But I must say that the third pole looks a bit too crooked.
RE: Arts and Musics - Yoshin - 05-30-2018
That one's supposed to be falling over, hard to represent without shading.
I also did a cover:
https://soundcloud.com/petty-french-kanadian/believe-me