Now this is the story

Now this is the story

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08-17-2019, 04:37 PM

Seems interesting, personally I would change:
"Chillin' out, maxin', relaxin all cool."
To:
"Chillin' out, waxin', relaxin all smooth."
Besides that, 10/10.

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Now this is the story - by CuteYoshiGirl - 08-16-2019, 11:59 PM

RE: Now this is the story - by SonicKade2048 - 08-17-2019, 01:31 AM

RE: Now this is the story - by Great Destination Tracks 3 - 08-17-2019, 04:57 AM

RE: Now this is the story - by recent - 08-17-2019, 10:40 AM

RE: Now this is the story - by EDGE - 08-17-2019, 04:37 PM

RE: Now this is the story - by strabiri - 08-17-2019, 09:18 PM

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