05-18-2025, 12:52 PM
It's kind of cute... I like Larry's grumpy face! It has a certain charm to it. But there's definitely some room for improvement.
Some of the lines are a little jagged. His arms are awfully wide, and in most of the frames, there's very little form to his arms.
Also, the shading is inconsistent. The overall shape of his hair is pretty good, but it would benefit from more texture as well.
Keep trying! As you make more sprites and get more feedback, you'll get better.
Some of the lines are a little jagged. His arms are awfully wide, and in most of the frames, there's very little form to his arms.
Also, the shading is inconsistent. The overall shape of his hair is pretty good, but it would benefit from more texture as well.
Keep trying! As you make more sprites and get more feedback, you'll get better.
Course clear! You got a card.
![[Image: CourseClear.gif]](https://dl.dropbox.com/s/d5mcpm4nmt0gd14/CourseClear.gif)
![[Image: CourseClear.gif]](https://dl.dropbox.com/s/d5mcpm4nmt0gd14/CourseClear.gif)