03-29-2018, 09:39 AM
perfect, another place where i can say "GRAND? DON'T YOU MEAN, GRAND DAD?"
The level looks great! I have a some nitpicks about it, though:
-The green Koopa Troopa at the start of the level seems like a Kaizo move to me, as somebody without a power-up (Being Small Mario) may have trouble getting past it if they don't have enough time, which, in-turn, would make them lose a life.
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909295296446464/unknown.png)
-The coins at this point seem impossible to collect without the use of a Cape Feather. Maybe try moving them around some more so people can get them?
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909344084590602/unknown.png)
-I'd probably change these pipes to the palette you're using to replace the green ones (Or whatever color you're replacing). They seem off in this kind of level.
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909476616208394/unknown.png)
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909480739078144/unknown.png)
-The midway point entrance shouldn't be this far away from the checkpoint itself. Can you move it closer, please?
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909542076579840/unknown.png)
-The area here between these blocks on the left and right seems a bit bland. Maybe place some other things in here, like terrain, enemies, other blocks?
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909679821717515/unknown.png)
Again, I like the level, but try to plan out everything more in-detail and carefully. It seems off in a few places.
The level looks great! I have a some nitpicks about it, though:
-The green Koopa Troopa at the start of the level seems like a Kaizo move to me, as somebody without a power-up (Being Small Mario) may have trouble getting past it if they don't have enough time, which, in-turn, would make them lose a life.
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909295296446464/unknown.png)
-The coins at this point seem impossible to collect without the use of a Cape Feather. Maybe try moving them around some more so people can get them?
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909344084590602/unknown.png)
-I'd probably change these pipes to the palette you're using to replace the green ones (Or whatever color you're replacing). They seem off in this kind of level.
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909476616208394/unknown.png)
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909480739078144/unknown.png)
-The midway point entrance shouldn't be this far away from the checkpoint itself. Can you move it closer, please?
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909542076579840/unknown.png)
-The area here between these blocks on the left and right seems a bit bland. Maybe place some other things in here, like terrain, enemies, other blocks?
![[Image: unknown.png]](https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428909278443864074/428909679821717515/unknown.png)
Again, I like the level, but try to plan out everything more in-detail and carefully. It seems off in a few places.