06-14-2019, 11:56 PM
So today I came up with an interesting idea to expand to the storyline: After the quartet defeats Madame Broode and the Broodals inside the Inverted Pyramid, I thought it would be extremely unexpected to have Peach turn to the rabbits and offer them a job organizing the eclipse festival. I haven't written this down on my document yet, but I thought that maybe the exchange could go something like this:
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"Those Broodals are all real brutes!" Starlow said. "Were they this bad during the wedding?"
"Pretty much," Peach answered. "They really live up to their name: A band of brutal Broodal brutes!" The group laughed lightly at the silly jingle.
"Yeah, yeah, yeah!" Topper moaned. "Watever ya say!"
The Princess went over to Daisy, untied her, and brought her to her feet.
"You guys can take anything down!" Daisy cheered, giving her a hug. "Thanks to you, the Chinstar is safe!"
"What in tarnation does it take to take you down?" Rango muttered.
"No wonder they call you Superstars," Spewart groaned.
"I think I pulled a muscle . . ." Madam Broode gurgled.
The five of them finally manage to stand up. Peach looked back over at them, thinking.
"You guys organized that wedding . . ." she said. She took a few paces towards them. "We have an eclipse party coming up at the Castle in a matter if days. Would you mind organizing that? I'll probably need some overseers."
The rabbits all looked at her, stunned.
"What? After we had just attacked you?" Hariet asked. "What kind of lunatic are you to ask us something like that?"
"Pretty much," Peach answered. "They really live up to their name: A band of brutal Broodal brutes!" The group laughed lightly at the silly jingle.
"Yeah, yeah, yeah!" Topper moaned. "Watever ya say!"
The Princess went over to Daisy, untied her, and brought her to her feet.
"You guys can take anything down!" Daisy cheered, giving her a hug. "Thanks to you, the Chinstar is safe!"
"What in tarnation does it take to take you down?" Rango muttered.
"No wonder they call you Superstars," Spewart groaned.
"I think I pulled a muscle . . ." Madam Broode gurgled.
The five of them finally manage to stand up. Peach looked back over at them, thinking.
"You guys organized that wedding . . ." she said. She took a few paces towards them. "We have an eclipse party coming up at the Castle in a matter if days. Would you mind organizing that? I'll probably need some overseers."
The rabbits all looked at her, stunned.
"What? After we had just attacked you?" Hariet asked. "What kind of lunatic are you to ask us something like that?"
"You seem to have been out for revenge solely because you felt that no one would ever hire you again!" Peach told them. "But I'll bet that whomever it might have been that Bowser hired, they would not have been any more successful than you. Don't be blame yourselves, though - it sounds like you guys are really good at what you do. You just happened to be working with Bowser in one of his schemes, and Mario has thwarted him every time. Mario's reputation precedes him, but it doesn't have to affect yours either. Come work with me on this festival! That is what you guys had wanted, right . . . a job?"
The five of them looked torn. The gravitation between both vengeance and her offer were quite strong. After several minutes, Hariet approached her uncomfortably. Peach took a few steps toward her, an inviting smile on her face and hand outstretched.
"You're right," Hariet replied. "It was all about the employment . . . I see no reason why we shouldn't." She finally did manage to smile and reach her hand out to meet with Peach's, and upon doing so, all the Broodals suddenly had an unusual feeling of satisfaction.
"Well . . ." Daisy said. "Wouldn't have seen that coming!"
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The five of them looked torn. The gravitation between both vengeance and her offer were quite strong. After several minutes, Hariet approached her uncomfortably. Peach took a few steps toward her, an inviting smile on her face and hand outstretched.
"You're right," Hariet replied. "It was all about the employment . . . I see no reason why we shouldn't." She finally did manage to smile and reach her hand out to meet with Peach's, and upon doing so, all the Broodals suddenly had an unusual feeling of satisfaction.
"Well . . ." Daisy said. "Wouldn't have seen that coming!"
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I would like to know what your thoughts are for this interesting addition to the story. Love trumps hate, right? Feel free to share with me any of your own ideas, too! Feedback would be appreciated.
I would try to make some sort of teaser trailer for this story to give a more vivid visual idea, let alone try to do some preliminary development, but I don't have a team of any sort to assist me with that yet.
By the way, today (June 14) is my grandfather's birthday. I thought I might digitize a sketch for him as a card.
Will try to make some more sketches. I might want to look for someone to give me some pixel art and sprite creation tutorials sometime, now that I have a Photoshop program.
I would try to make some sort of teaser trailer for this story to give a more vivid visual idea, let alone try to do some preliminary development, but I don't have a team of any sort to assist me with that yet.
By the way, today (June 14) is my grandfather's birthday. I thought I might digitize a sketch for him as a card.
Will try to make some more sketches. I might want to look for someone to give me some pixel art and sprite creation tutorials sometime, now that I have a Photoshop program.