Norman the Completely and Utterly Average

[GamerInGeorgia]

I had a creative writing assignment in my class where I was supposed write a short story. The minimum length was one page, so I, of course, went ahead and wrote six pages of something that ended being more like the beginning of a more grandiose tale than a short story. Feel free to give your thoughts and critique my work! Link to story: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1d3COrRF...sp=sharing

[VinnyVideo]

This is a lot of fun! I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation of Norman's incredibly average adventures...

You have a strong vocabulary and a very engaging writing style. Watch out for a few long sentences in the first paragraph of the second page, though - you could probably afford to split them up a bit.

(I'll give you an 'A' for this assignment!)

Course clear! You got a card.