GIG's Art and Music Potpourri

[Evil Yoshi Toes]

I like it. it has character!
You might want to watch your anatomy. I know you aren't going for a realistic drawing but even cartoons should have a good understanding of the human anatomy and exaggerate it to get a point across (ex. a football player with very wide shoulders and a very tiny waist. The exaggeration should say something and look intentional, is what I'm getting at). The way the right arm curves in looks a little strange, as does the way his left shoulder connects with the neck. It seems to dip in, where on a real human that part would actually be slanted down from the neck to the shoulder. I think the messy line has a charm to it and I imagine it was intentional, but maybe you could push it further by varying line weights. Perhaps make the line thicker where there would be shadow and thinner on the parts with more light. This can add a sense of light to your drawing despite the colors being flat. I'd also boost the contrast on the holes of the button a bit. They're a nice touch but I didn't notice they were there at first.

Good job and keep it up!